tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3805852722324824073.post3607843090240388844..comments2022-04-08T17:51:28.198-07:00Comments on <center>mind, body, spirit</center>: Ep. 16 - The Ghost and the FireAJ Snookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12268937863131362137noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3805852722324824073.post-21447711349191925312013-08-12T05:05:03.338-07:002013-08-12T05:05:03.338-07:00What do people think of the story? Any feedback wo...What do people think of the story? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. My own criticism is that it is too full of description and lacks dialogue. Though, I think I could turn this into a novel: Bear at work and the gradual noises and strange things he notices in the house, moments in the laundry room next to the corpse, interactions with the landlord...AJ Snookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12268937863131362137noreply@blogger.com